Oh gosssssh. Where to start? First off... I'm so amazed. Your writing is even more amazing than it has been! Is that Gil's influence? 8|

It started off slowly... and by the time the last fight came, it was all going fast! Perfect lead up and climax ghfdjkgh Oh goooood. America coming at the end... oh, goodness. And AUGH the fight scees were amazing!

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU I DON'T KNOW WHAT ELSE AAAH SO AMAZING.